Problem Solution Post
Problem Solution Post For Internet Safety
By: Hayden R.
Introduction
First of all I am going to talk about the problem paragraph’s first. Then after that I’m going to talk about the solution paragraphs. Then to finish it it off I’m going to write a conclusion paragraph. So my overall essay is going to be about internet safety. So let’s get started.
Problem Paragraph
This is my first problem paragraph and it’s going to be about the major internet safety problems. The first major internet safety problem is that some kids and teenagers have gotten bullied so much on the internet that they have committed suicide that could affect other people’s lives around them forever. “Every 60 seconds a hateful or insulting comment is sent to someone.” ( source 2 ) Another internet safety problem is your personal information and identity that could be sent out to the world and that a person’s private information can be seen by everyone in the world. “Chris Carroll remembers the first time he saw someone hack into an insulin pump and make it deliver a deadly dose.” ( source ) also “Frank Painter advises healthcare companies . He said we must have not worry about an unsecure system being able to be violated by accident.”
Problem paragraph
Now I am going to talk about the less major problems for internet safety, so let’s get started. One problem for internet safety that isn’t major is that a stranger could affect your relationship or communication with that another person. My evidence is that someone could interrupt your communication with that person and say bad things. My reasoning is that this could have been their family so now they have a bad relationship with that person. So there’s one problem that’s not too major that is online.
Now I’m going to talk about the two solution paragraph’s and the conclusion paragraph.
Solution Paragraph
This is my first solution paragraph out of the two solution paragraphs. The first paragraphs is the more major things that need to be solved. One major solution that needs to happen is that everyone needs to be a good digital citizen online and they need to send nice messages instead of mean managers. My evidence is that if the NiceBot is nice to somebody then that person is nice to somebody then that sequence can continue and the digital world would be a great place. My reasoning is that “Every thirty-six seconds @TheNiceBot sends a cheesey and cheerful message.” (source 2 )And that is because a group of “champions against bullying” wanted to make a difference. That is a more major solution that needs to happen in the online world.
Solution Paragraph
The second solution paragraph is going to be about less major solutions that needs to happen in the digital world. One less major solution that needs to happen on the online world is that if you are nice to lots of people online then eventually other people will be nice to you. My evidence is that if you are nice to lots of people then they will eventually be nice back to you and then the digital world can be a good place. My reasoning is that “someone put a lure module down for a poke stop in the pokemon go game and it attracted other people and those people were giving stuff to the person in the game who put the lure module down.” That is my reasoning.
Conclusion paragraph
So this is my last paragraph that is my conclusion. So my main idea for this essay is about everyone being a digital citizen. If everyone is a good digital citizen then there would be less cyberbullying and the world would be a better place. If one person is nice to everyone else then the people he or she is nice too will be nice to others on the internet. So this my problem solution post, how did you like it?
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Sources:
https://newsela.com/articles/twitter-nicebot/id/13492/ ( source 2 )
https://newsela.com/articles/twitter-nicebot/id/13492/ ( source 2 )
https://newsela.com/articles/medical-hackers/id/4018/ ( source newsela )